Wow, colorful and delighting. Just capturing and vivid. Like the memories of a past time childhood. Just lovely.
"And upon the sun rising ,
flying light upon this day;
a group of souls together,
making memories built to stay."
I love this stanza, its nicely written.

Second stanza first line, there is a space between 'rising' and the comma.

Overall this was a well written piece which I enjoyed reading. It is true how such a little smile can just lighten up someones day. A beautiful write full of truth. Keep up the great work.

Peace, Joe

The imagery, rhyme, and style stand out to make this very outstanding