Iiiiiiiiii like it...
alot alot
i like it a WHOLE lot...
amazing job<3
love your work<3

Thankkkk youuu

A thought, A craving,
While you gaze up at the stars,
Diamonds scattered in the sky,
But baby, someday they will be ours.

** i really like how u described this. very interesting.. my favorite part too.

some thins i would change is the repeat of the word "the" its very repetitive.

other than tht its a good poem

Excellent!!!! i Love it great job, alot of passion behind it

Excellent!!!! i Love it great job, alot of passion behind it

This really did bring a tear to my eye. you have an amazing gift, and amazing talent. you really can tell that you are a poet at heart :]
wonderful write. the emotion was 100% there and the structure of this couldn't be more perfect. keep it up!

5/5

This is a really good poem