Comments : Write Your Heart Out

  • 11 years ago

    by Hologram

    "Have a moment, Take a chance
    Stand up tall, Take your stance
    Give them hell, Make them pay
    Write your heart out, Its the only way"

    I loved that stanza, great way to finish off the poem.
    Great work.
    10/10

    x

  • 11 years ago

    by RavingMoonDoll

    "Feel the anger, Feel the pain
    Rip your heart out, Lay it down
    Use bloody fingers, Make a name
    Be the king, Take your crown"

    that was awsome...dude your brilliant!

  • 11 years ago

    by Fire Catches

    EVERY SINGLE TIME you write something AMAZING!
    This had such a good flow!!!!
    10/5
    Such brilliant writing!

  • 11 years ago

    by katie

    "Take a paper, Take a pen,
    Take a story, Take a voice
    Place the paper, Use the pen,
    Write a story, Its your choice"

    Great stanza! The whole poem is great! Great flow! Loved it! 5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by damont

    Simple and sweet lovely flow too.

  • 10 years ago

    by damont

    Simple and sweet lovely flow too.