That is a brillhant poem this is how i felt when my first love left 4 years ago and we r just back together again now... proves true love exsists =] well done xx

Great poem 5/5

OMG! I love this poem! It's really cool. I can to relate to when i fell in love. Great Job!!

I really enjoyed this poem. I can totally relate. It was such a beautiful poem. Really. The flow was a bit rough in some places, but apart from that it was really well written. keep it up.

Great poem I felt the same way wit my first heart break. It was wit a girl, its hard to let go but sometime u jus can't. But know dis ur mind is stronger than your heart