My Soul

by Gasttlee   Jul 23, 2009


The tears in my eyes
drop dead blood.

Every ounce that pours
breaks the spirit of my bones.

Where does this disease crawl from?
The poison through my heart
or the shadow of my dark side?

If there is a soul for me
I pray it's a soul that will show me
the light in others
I've never before seen.

A soul of compassion, love and reason for my being
and all I have to offer.

    report violation
0


Did You Like This Poem?

Latest Comments

  • 14 years ago

    by Karl Wild GG23

    I too wish I had the ability to see the good in others much easier than I do now. Sometimes I wonder if I'm having difficulty or if there just isn't very much good to find. I think the people we love are more like us then we'd like to admit, we have the same beliefs and passions in a lot of ways. I wish to find the same things in a person... love and compassion. Great job well done as always although it was short it wasn't terrible. Nicely done 5/5

  • 14 years ago

    by Sourav

    Very intense write. Liked the style! :)

  • 14 years ago

    by Cindy

    Very deep and filled with so much emotion. Your words are crying out to the reader.
    Great job!
    Take Care
    Cindy

  • 14 years ago

    by Krzysztof J

    I can relate to your poems so i give this one 5/5

Read All Comments (4)

More Poems By Gasttlee