OMG!!! This was soooo good. I love the way you did this. The style like blew my mind hun. I love the way you express yourself in this poem, I can really relate to what you're saying and it's so sad. A very powerful poem indeed. More people need to read this, it's brillant. Nik

Wow, you just broke a feeling inside me. I felt like i was saying these very same words before. De Javu. Nice work

They think I'm lying.
Some fictional tale.
the sadness merely a dream.

love it! its sad how peope just cant seem to believe your goin through real pain sometimes and not somthin your makin up.
-Tania

I am amazed. You just took the words right out of my mouth dear. Great job and unique way of writing that just works here.
5/5
~Kitty

Wow! your writing is just amazing :]]

i love this one its full of emotion :]

5/5