by rema Jul 30, 2009
category :
Dark, fantasy /
dark, horror
Silence. |
Sad and touchy |
by Jessica
That was great, my only suggestion is that you should maybe spell-check the poem because there are a few spots in there that need to be fixed (it happens to me too) but aside from a few grammatical errors, the flow was great and the poem was very entertaining. Nice work! 5/5 |