Comments : On Rails of Steel

  • 14 years ago

    by Sylvia

    Randy, an excellent write. Sometimes we leave behind the person we love the most and then cannot forget them and as the last line says, pray to meet them again. Well done.

  • 14 years ago

    by Cindy

    Randy
    This is so beautiful :) The imagery you have paited for the minds eye is awesome.
    Excellent job!
    ~hugs~
    Cindy

  • 14 years ago

    by NightFlyer

    Thank you, Sylvia and Cindy! I was missing my good poet friend Mari Ann, who I left behind when I moved back to Massachusetts.

  • 14 years ago

    by TJ Arizona Eagle

    Nice write. It's full of imagery and emotion which is my favorite in poems. Fantastic and enjoyable

  • 14 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    Your poems flow with such ease it makes the
    reader to melt with your write. I especially
    like your decriptions which makes the image
    come alive..a touching write. Take care.

  • 14 years ago

    by Dreamofolwin

    A beautiful sad write . Just captivating. As usual your images are so vivid... so real , they just draw the reader right into the heart of the poem! I loved it :)

    "and listen to the lonely breeze" ...
    I could really feel this... !

    Excellent job Randy :)

  • 14 years ago

    by NightFlyer

    Thank you for your kind comments to my sad poem!

  • 14 years ago

    by Rachel RTVW

    Good rhythm, flow and imagery in this piece! Nice job!