Good poem. The flow and rhyme was constant throughout the entire poem and I didn't notice anywhere where you needed to make corrections. The poem was true though in its words. A good write and I hope to see more. -Jad
" I wish I didn't have to hide behind the mask and be who I want to be"
There was a lot of hurt in this. I can relate with this poem and the the line:
" If only to know I can love"
aw >.< when something like this happens its so hard to look forward to anything anymore. We want the answers for what happened . We're human. Its our feelings, then why can't we know why we must feel this way?
Anyways, ( sorry for the rant) It was beautiful ^_^