I haven't seen a poem this sad yet warm in a long time...

Your insecurities diminished my appetite for living
*This was my all time favorite line. Flawless and sooo creative. Wow...this was amazing. I don't know what else to say. Such a powerful piece. I love how you ended this as well. Wow...keep it up hun. Nik*

Excellent word you, rhythm was great. The ending was very powerful. Only one thing that I found:

"I'm walking alone in our memories, your footprints need oiling"

The word oiling, kind of threw me off a bit, the rhythm and rhymn was great until that word came but then after that it went well, other than that excellent poem, well written.