"There, we oftenly say goodbye
In our darkest night
There's still a morning light,
Shinning for you and I
I'll remember you for always,
If could only this way"

This is my favorite stanza, it's so sad. Each word feels as if it's been carefully placed. There is a softness in your poem, so silky, it leaves you feeling fragile. You have a way with words, keep writting. 5/5!

mandy :)

This is a really good poem, i loved every linee (:

This is a really good poem, i loved every linee (:

Very nice one!

Made me smile :)