Sweetly said. We are always forgiven and accepted with open arms
Very nice

A write that gives us hope knowing that even
if others don't accept us there is one person
who is ready to take us..nicely penned :)

It is special and for a child of 12 it was well written. God does forgive our sins and accepts us. Your words describing heaven fit my thoughts as to how it will be. Well done.

Its great to have a God that forgives. Great job on this poem i love it :)

I think it is everyone's mission in life to end up going to heaven. i thought that the poem was great and the imagery created was very nice, keep up the nice work

Kerry Gardiner

Olwin what a beautiful poem of Faith :) Thanks for sharing this with us :)
Love Cindy

What a great write. It amazes me that you wrote this at 12, it is very well done. Not much more to say on this one. :)