The Lion

by Rachel RTVW   Aug 5, 2009


Through the bars people stare at me
What a mighty meal they'd be
If just for once a gate wouldn't close
Or if I could bite my trainer's toes

When in my native habitat
I don't seem like so large a cat
Land to roam for miles and more
Many species to hunt, chances to score

Now in captivity I bask in the sun
This little place, no room to run
I pace around the perimeter
Golden orange, my mane of fur

Wish my eyes could melt these bars
Chase you all back to your cars
And once again I'd be in charge
King of the land for I am that large

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  • 14 years ago

    by TJ Arizona Eagle

    Very different and original, I smiled as I read it. It was great imagery at the same time made me feel for the animal.
    this was really a great write

  • 14 years ago

    by Sourav

    Rachel... sometimes I womder how do you write such wonderful poems! :)
    It's a very unique piece, perspective from a caged animal. Makes me sad when I see them. Lovely poem!

  • 14 years ago

    by Lonely Rider

    The emotions of a caged lion are beautifully described...
    well penned... reading you after a long time :)

  • 14 years ago

    by Cindy

    Rachel
    What a unique piece. I can't wait to share it with the girls :) Great imagery in this.
    Excellent job!
    Love
    Aunt Cindy

  • 14 years ago

    by Nee

    What a cute poem :)
    Loved your rhyme Rach..It's always very good!
    well done~

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