Comments : I Wonder.... (Huitain)

  • 14 years ago

    by Sylvia

    You lived up to the challenge and did a good job. You wrote about some of the same things I wonder about and then thank God for giving them to us to enjoy. Well done.

  • 14 years ago

    by Cindy

    Wonderful job on the form challenge Olwin.
    NIce subject :)
    ((Hugs))
    Cindy

  • 14 years ago

    by Grant Gilbert AKA Slash

    Beautifully written Olwin with a lovely sentiment behind your words, i like contemplative poetry.

    Grant

  • 14 years ago

    by Lonely Rider

    Wonderfully penned...
    very meaningful write :)

  • 14 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    This has a spiritual feel to it which gives the
    heart a ray of hope. You have done well
    with the form!

  • 14 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    Loved how you capitolized 'He' and 'Him' it emphasizes the meaning of this person, they are very important to you. Interesting thoughts, how many stars fill the sky and how many drops can fill the sea. I dont think I can say I have ever thought of that. :) Well done.