Comments : Not with words

  • 14 years ago

    by Keith

    Really god poem, especially is english isnt your 1st language, keep it up

    feel freecomment back!

  • 14 years ago

    by Em

    I loved this. Everything seemed to fit together.
    "Stay close ,
    Stay affectionate ,
    Let me always feel you
    The best love is not with words
    It's something that shows only in your eyes" < this was my fave stanza.
    Flawless piece. Love is best left unspoken. Well written, 5/5. Em

  • 13 years ago

    by ShIsAnA tHe OnE aNd OnLy

    This is an amazing poem my favorite stanza was the 1 stanza

    "For me to live my days for you ,
    Let me see my dreams within you ,
    And feel you always by my side ,
    Whether you are near or far.
    Not with words ..."

    truely amazing 5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by Marvellous

    Love announced, is simply deceit. Love is demonstrated kindness.

  • 11 years ago

    by Khalid M Darwish

    Stellar! The best part of sta nza is "You'll remain in my eyes the greatest love" which indicates that he's the only one who would fill your eyes and this itself is great if accompanied with trust, faith and honnor. It can even come with the greatest results ever. I really enjoyed the style of repetition.