Comments : In That Beautiful City...

  • 14 years ago

    by Sylvia

    We should all praise God, He above all is our best friend and will always be there for us. Well done.

  • 14 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    A great write, I agree with Sylvia, we should always praise God for he's always there for us. I am nodding my head in agreement with your poem, each word was well written.

  • 14 years ago

    by TJ Arizona Eagle

    Good job Olwin. Truer words haven't been spoken. We lose track of whats important . Poems like this bring us back to what we need to focus on

  • 14 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    Words of praise for God is never enough. This
    poem is like a self realised heart has opened
    up..nicely written :)