Wow very deep and it is very true. Words are always deeper then actions alone. Good job liked it alot

Wow i loved the tone of this poem, subtle yet filled with powerful meaning. However, i think you should check how many times you used the word "back" in the last stanza...at least three times if im not mistaken..but that's ok...sometimes it is the emotions that matter us the most..

Lol..and as for my poem, thanks for the compliment but lol..even if you spend your whole life wondering for whom that poem was, you wont know it...That was for Edward - while leaving the Forks)