One perfect song

Wow this is flawless.

Overall a wonderful write; however, there are a few minor things that you can do to improve upon it. For one, use punctuation. Two, don't use a lot of filler words. Here I'll give you an example of the first stanza:

"She is the melody
A gentle note sweet in sound
Moving gracefully through the airwaves
With delicate steps, poise and balance"

This could easily be better read with some punctuation and some minor changes in the wording...

'She is the melody,
gentle; sweet in sound.
Gracefully moving airwaves
delicately, balanced and poised.'

Other than the above stated and my example, this was a well thought out piece, keep up the good work.

Peace, Joe

Wow! i liked it...!!! (:

If you're interested, send me a pm.

Grace and peace to you from God.

Personally, I greatly enjoy reading love poems that incorporate the arts in its story. Those first two stanzas are very elegant and graceful. Absolutely gorgeous!

Would you be interested in co-writing a poem with me sometime?