Comments : You'll Never Be There {dedicated to my dad}

  • 14 years ago

    by CY GINDLE

    Wow this really hits home I know i put my
    family through hell but they never gave up on me and they really should have . I must have tried to stop using a million times but
    finally I just had enough. thats the only way
    i could really quit when i was stopping for me. all the other times was for everyone else
    and it just don't work like that you have to
    want to stop for yourself but anyway i clean and enjoying my life sober and my family still
    with me and have always been. I hope no I
    PRAY the same thing happens for your family
    too. I like your writting style the way you called your dad a baby without saying it
    that was cool your rhying was awesome
    all together a excellent poem you make me
    as the reader feel your anger and pain
    I look forward to reading all your poems

  • 14 years ago

    by Italian Stallion

    Very nice write. I would've liked to see some punctuation, but other than that, it was a nice write.