Comments : Winter (String Haiku)

  • 14 years ago

    by Sylvia

    You did a very good job on this Olwin. The images of winter are so vivid. Sounds like you have visited my area. Well done.

  • 14 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    Ohhh yes the touch of winter can be seen and
    felt..enjoyed this read :D

  • 14 years ago

    by Lonely Rider

    Lovely... i could feel the chills :P
    well penned :)

  • 14 years ago

    by Christopher Wry

    That is winter all right. nice work all around.

  • 14 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    Another great write, loved how you kind of gave winter the personification touch in the first stanza. good descriptions! nice work.

  • 14 years ago

    by Em

    I dislike the cold, dark nights of the winter but this poem makes it seem so beautiful even if it is cold lol. 5/5, Em