Well done. We are the believers. Without my belief in God, I am not sure I would have made it this far in life.

A very strong and powerful write Sourav... Well done!

Too much suffering & we wonder where God
is in this desperate time. A in depth write with
a strong message..well penned!

I enjoyed it. You stand strong in your view and backed it well. Deep and wise words to see.

Sourav,

We'll search our own God within ourselves.

^^
This was the line that said it all.
All that is, is within Him, the earth, all that is on it, the universe. We are like cells of His body.
When we are born, our conciousness is covered with a veil, because otherwise we would not be able to function and do what we are here for: to learn from our stay here.
A lot of people are frustrated because they feel they were handed a bad hand by God...they do not realize we learn from all we encounter and the so called"bad"things are just the other side of the coin. We, in our ignorance, have decided we should only have good luck and prosperity, but the truth is that all experiences are equal in the way they enable personal growth. There is no such things as goos or bad, those are man-made labels, there is just learning.

Good poem, one that will hopefully make people think:)

*hugs*

5/5 Ingrid

* good or bad ( lol)

Sourav, you have done some nice work here, I really enjoyed this piece, it gets you thinking.

"Melting truth, burning lies, provocation of getting profane
In our nakedness of pretension we still believe - The God!?"

I really like these lines, to me I can almost feel the...frustration...for lack of a better word.

"Sufferers are suffering and we believe they need to suffer more..."

A strong statement that automatically makes you stop and think of the world and what is and has gone on.

Good work.

Sourav
Such a strong and profound piece. It is hard at times not to question our Faith when we see so much agony, suffering and death. This poem speaks loudly and directly. It gives the reader a lot to ponder.
You did a awesome job bringing your feelings to light.
Excellent!
Take care
Cindy

All we can really know is the God in ourselves, and hopefully see it in others, or in our surroundings, as I do. Nature is how I know God. You have written a very strong poem.