Very well done . You took the words and used them to make a poem we can all relate to at some point in our life ?

Olwin, you did a good job with the word association challenge. The creature lives within all of us at some point. How unique it is to give it a life by calling it a creature. Well done.

'But the thorns pierce my soul so deep.'
^One of my favorite lines! Loved the way you used 'pierce' well done.

Great write. I think we all have had what seems like a 'creature' inside of us that we can't fight.. which seems to result in these kind of emotions. You did well with this one--I think almost everyone can relate.

You have used the words to spin a sadness
which everyone feels at one point..a touching
write..

I think you did a great job using the words to create such a sad poem that we can all relate to. I especially liked the last line of this piece. Well done, 5/5
Katie <3

Have you read 'the Host' ... your poem depicts the same feeling that the character in the book must have felt... although here the one inside may be you yourself ...

well penned...and dark indeed

A very dark, deep but truly wonderful written piece, 5/5. Em