Comments : Spring... (String Haiku)

  • 14 years ago

    by Starlight

    Olwin, you have brought chills to my summer day :) Once again!
    Such a Beautiful write. I absolutely adore this piece. You couldn't have done It any better.

    "Spring is in the air
    I can see it everywhere
    Breaking winters spell"

    Clear image, your imagination here was great, It just pulls me In further, i couldn't have expressed this any better. Great work.

    "Tiny buds appear
    Soon to blossom everywhere
    Creating delight"

    Here's when It gets very interesting, you seemed to have expressed a beautiful spring morning here. "Tiny buds" :), aw how sweet of thee lol

    "At last winters gone
    Spring has brought us a new song
    Cheering dreary hearts"

    The last line here, Is just jaw' dropping, it was very cute, i really enjoyed this. It made me smile :)

    5/5

    Jay

  • 14 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    'Breaking winters spell'
    ^Technically, winter's should have an apostrophe .

    Loved this, so uplifting and beautiful. Spring has got to be one of my favorite seasons. The flowers make everything so beautiful.

    Well done (:

  • 14 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    I like Spring, its like life is born after Winter's
    death..enjoyed the read :D

  • 14 years ago

    by Em

    Oh, how I love the spring when the cold & dark nights suddenly disappear. 5/5, Em