Comments : Clouds

  • 14 years ago

    by Ingrid

    Silvia,

    I love to watch the clouds, during day, but also when it's night. My son wanted to be an astronomist for a long time, so he had me accompany him on his nightly adventures and I watched the sky by night on many, many occasions. It has such an aura of exitement to it..the fresh, crisp air ( especially in winter), the moon, stars and the clouds, illuminated is a really spooky way, lol.
    Yes, the sky is an infinite source of wonder, amazement and entertainment:)

    Well done:)

    *hugs*

    5/5 Ingrid
    ps: I am reading a second layer in this and I just have one thing to say: stay on course, don't let things get you down;)

  • 14 years ago

    by Dreamofolwin

    Sylvia, I love how you write about the clouds playing hide and seek with the moon. I love night time... and the feeling it gives. I enjoyed reading this... though it ended with a feeling of sadness.

    Hope all is well,
    LOL,
    Olwin.

  • 14 years ago

    by TJ Arizona Eagle

    Casting shadows on the ground,
    phantoms dancing, frolicking,
    as if to say, catch me if you can.

    what a simple playful poem. The imagery is vivid and makes a person long for the moonlight .

  • 14 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    Ooo this was really pretty. I must agree with everyone else very great imagery. Loved the description of the naked tree limbs as well as how great you described the clouds, the main focus of the poem. The moon sleeping.. too many good lines in this poem, can't pick my favorite, cause they were all equally amazing! Great imagery, great poem, well done!

  • 14 years ago

    by Corinne

    Wonderful Sylvia. Your personification of clouds is so well done!

  • 14 years ago

    by The Queen

    At first i thought this was a spooky poem not until i read about the clouds being bored from the sun. I would prefer the sun to play hide and seek with the clouds rather than the moon..Scary!..Great reciation about the clouds though..

  • 14 years ago

    by katie

    Very well written. I love the whole thing. Keeo on writing hun.

  • 14 years ago

    by mandy

    Beautifuly put. I love the wording, 5/5

    mandy :)