Comments : Reflections

  • 14 years ago

    by Ingrid

    I's not something to wish for: solitude beckoning..but at some points in life it does and we withdraw from life for a short time to reflect upon all that has happened to us and eventually come out stronger..

    Would then I had noticed,
    the missing hues
    in my dream palette.

    ^^

    Very deep, loved the words you used here...

    Well done:)

    *hugs*

    5/5 Ingrid

  • 14 years ago

    by Sylvia

    Reflections of times past, memories do bring to mind, If only. Well done.

  • 14 years ago

    by TJ Arizona Eagle

    Amazing use of words

    Would then I had noticed,
    the missing hues
    in my dream palette.

    my favorite .."dream palette"creative and very original

  • 14 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    Solitutde, sometimes its good sometimes it
    hurts to be alone..I can feel your emotions
    in each verse...take care.

  • 14 years ago

    by Corinne

    A lovely, somewhat melancholy poem. Just the right touch of rhyme here and there. Nicely done :-)

  • 14 years ago

    by Cindy

    Raj
    What a great poem. I can feel the sadness.

    Sigh!!! solitude beckons again,
    under the silver sky
    and clouds floating by.

    This stanza really tugged at my heart
    Excellent job!
    Love Cindy

  • 14 years ago

    by katie

    Very touching

  • 14 years ago

    by Annaam

    "Sigh!!! solitude beckons again,
    under the silver sky
    and clouds floating by. "
    --> WOw. Very well done :)

    5/5