Liar, Love

by NaeNaeConspiracy   Aug 29, 2009


Your eyes are like A sleeping rose.
Gorgeous and tender but empty and cold.
Your touch is like fire.
Deep and passionate, but angry and fierce.
Your words are like a rainbow.
Ever going and never real.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Black Heart Still Beating

    AWW! thats really nice.
    it took my breath away :)
    the substance was good, and i felt like it was right u know what i mean? the comparisons and what not XD !
    good job
    5outa5.
    **bri

  • 16 years ago

    by mckenzie

    Very good descriptions. The imagery is nicely displayed, appealing to the senses.

    'Your eyes are like A sleeping rose'.
    Never heard this one before. Quite unique.

    Like the contrasts you used.
    The rose, the fire. You used them brilliantly in both positive and negative connotations.

    'Your words are like a rainbow.
    Ever going and never real.'

    I believe a rainbow to be real. Even if its just for a moment. But not tangible. I see it as an expression of hope. You know its there but can't hold on to it.

    Its just me, but I might write something like

    Your words are like a rainbow
    Colourful, but without substance

    Or

    Your words are like a rainbow
    Beautifully laid out fading too soon

    But its great the way it is. 5/5

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