Comments : Help... (Josephs Star )

  • 14 years ago

    by Sylvia

    I feel that way right now, I need help. (smiles) We do need to do all we can with God's help to save the world. Good job with the form.

  • 14 years ago

    by Cindy

    Olwin
    Great job with the form and the challenge :)
    We all need to do all the little things we can...if everyone did we could have a impact on things.
    Love Cindy

  • 14 years ago

    by Lady Nik

    I loved this. I love how you worded this. I've seen so many poems like this but I can really relate to what you're saying in this one. Great work deary :) Nik

  • 14 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    This was true and relevant to today's world. There are many problems we could solve if we worked together. A great write that opens the reader's eyes. Great work. (:

  • 14 years ago

    by TJ Arizona Eagle

    Good job there Rambling Irish lady lol

  • 14 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    Seems like nobody cares as the world withers
    & dies. Liked the read :)

  • 14 years ago

    by Em

    A very powerful message behind this, 5/5. Em