Comments : Growing Up Without a Clue

  • 10 years ago

    by Sylvia

    I think it takes most of us almost a lifetime to realize that beauty comes from within not things or processes done to the external self. Thanks for the smiles today, they were much needed.

  • 10 years ago

    by Dreamofolwin

    A great write Cindy ! :) I just loved it... So full of truth :) True beauty is indeed inward. Fantastic!

  • 10 years ago

    by nikki

    Great poem i love it :)

  • 10 years ago

    by TJ Arizona Eagle

    You penned what every girl or guy thinks of themselves through life. I was never happen with who I was , but now that I have grown

    I"M REALLY NOT HAPPY :=)

    LOL really cool write Cindy

  • 10 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    Very strong message in this write. The beauty should be found within, instead of on the outside. I think we do realize this as we grow older. Well written. (:

  • 10 years ago

    by Rachel RTVW

    Growing Up Without a Clue

    ^Never had a perfect shape
    Always wanted curly hair
    Feet were just way too big
    Complexion oh so fair^

    Good rhythm and flow!

    We seem to be obsessed as a society about our looks and we never seem to be happy with them.

    ^Freckles ran across my nose
    Got green eyes instead of blue
    Always clumsy, couldn't dance
    Growing up without a clue^

    Still keeping with the good rhythm and flow here. The visual is funny and cute!

    ^Wished to look like my sisters
    Uncomfortable in my skin
    Had breasts that were too heavy
    How could a girl ever win^

    This is something so many people can relate to wanting to look like someone else and being uncomfortable in your own skin.

    ^Took half a century to see
    it doesn't matter if your thin
    Guess somethings come with age
    Like seeing beauty from within^

    Great ending with the words of wisdom that come with age.

    Nice job on the poem. Cute, funny and relatable!

  • 10 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    Awesome poem. Something to make you smile and learn. Deep message expressed in a very smooth flow. Something that everybody could relate to.

    Though majority of the people would have heard of this message but the simplicity with which you presented it, they all could relate to it more now.

    loved it

    all the best and take care

  • 10 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    We always want to be something else besides
    us..all in all I liked the way you wrote this
    with. Its simple as well as truthful :D Liked it.

  • 10 years ago

    by Em

    We always want to be someone or something else. Loved it, 5/5 x

  • 10 years ago

    by katie

    Great poem! All of it very true. Loved it. 5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by Dixiedaisy

    Very nice to reminisce those times. Glad to see you stepping outside the box on your poetry genre. A very lovely poem as usual.

    Love ya,
    Kay

  • 9 years ago

    by Fran

    Excellent poem, funny yet poignant.