Kind awhile
Then we poison

Doesnt really flow that well

Other than that i thought it was really good. Nice job. And P.S thanx for the honesty. lol

Honestly these lyrics made me think and most active things must breathe to grow

It seems as these lyrics reflect, the truth is most often poluted or diluted, good luck getting your point across

These are very good lyrics and ideas for a song. i just think you need to work on the flow of things a little.