Really nice Sylvia.
A good day it shall be too. Thinking of the ones that make our world go round. Your words are always so sweetly written.

Colm, I reworded the first line. Thanks.

Beautiful Lira, Silvia.

The only remark I could make is that in the last line caused should be causes imo, because all of the poem is present tense, but I could be wrong here!

*hugs*

5/5 Ingrid

Sounds like the PERFECT day to me as well! Such a refreshing write, very beautifully written. I hope that you enjoyed a day such as this one youve wrote about. Well done Sylvia. (:

Wonderful Lira Sylvia ......reading your poem made me reflect back to those times when I use to enjoy the flowers.
Love Cindy

I can feel it & it creates a smile, a sense of
peace when the day is good. You did well
with the form & at the same time brought
out the message...good write!