This was a great write with your own unique spin to it. I don't think I've seen someone write about their alter-ego before so I must say you are the first. Interesting write here, although simple I enjoyed it.

I sure hope mine isn't trying to escape from a mirror...LOL....I truely enjouyed this piece.
Great job!

I agree... A very unique write! I enjoyed reading this :) Well done!

You have given me something to think about. I never thought to give my alter ego a name. Well done.

Oh yes we all have a darker side that scares
us more then anything else. Liked the rhyme
& flow..good :)

Wow I actually loved this. 5/5 x x

My dark side or alter ego at times gives me fits. Keeping it in control isn't always easy but necessary
A good write for sure

I definitly agee with the other this was such a creative and unique piece of art. bravo :)

I thought this was a very interesting poem. Your ideas are new and that's refreshing to see. Keep it up :) Nik

Gothic child was the name of mine. but i've finally killed him. good poem.