Very good. Love's touch does heal us when nothing else will. Well done with the form. A good blend of sadness that turns to joy in the end.

This poem was sooo beautiful! The beginning makes you think its going to be a sad love poem but then the ending gives hope when love touches you, it heals you and brings forth light instead of darkness. Really enjoyed this, Cindy! Well done. :]

Well done on this form. Love can erase pain.
5/5

Your choice of words always amazes me and specially the simplicity. I remember someone quoting you as a 'simple poet' once and thats what i love the best about your poems. Simple is pure and deep.
Loved it all the way.

all the best and take care

I am beginning to like this form more and more. Thanks Mel:-)
I agree with Nitin you are just amazing . Worded with perfection.

Love does have a healing touch that will cure
all. Liked the read & you did well with the
form..take care.

Beautifully penned.No challenge to big, no form or style of writing escapes your most tallented mind.
An enjoyable read.
Paul...