Comments : One More Day

  • 14 years ago

    by Ingrid

    Mine is still alive, but we are not close and never were.

    I'd have given anything to have had at least one person in my life to be close to like in mother and daughter...

    Very touching write, Silvia!

    *hugs*

    5/5 Ingrid

  • 14 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    Yes I agree with Ingrid a very touching write. Full of emotions. Another great write from you Sylvia...keep it up!

  • 14 years ago

    by Cindy

    Sylvia
    What a heart warming piece. It is very sad but it really touches the heart. I can't imagine life without my mom. She has always been there for me. Your words paint a picture so full of love. I felt like I was seeing something very special.
    Excellent job!
    Love Cindy

  • 14 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    Sylvia, this is one of the best touching poem i have ever read on this site. I strongly believe in 'Family' and i love my parents a lot. Your poem brought tears and trust me...they don't come so easily in my eyes. :)
    Loved it, very nicely written.

    all the best and take care

  • 14 years ago

    by Dreamofolwin

    Beautiful touching piece Sylvia... A mother's love is special, and so is your poem. Very special.... Thankyou for it :) Lol.

  • 14 years ago

    by TJ Arizona Eagle

    Beautifully written. It's hard to put into words the feelings for our mothers

  • 14 years ago

    by Tammi

    This is so sad and I feel the love I still have my mom but lost my dad 3 months ago and I feel this poem shows the love I had no have for him I will always be daddys litttle girl and thanks for sharing this with us 5/5

    Tammi,

  • 14 years ago

    by Countess of Monte Cristo

    This is very nice. A mother is one of the important things in life. You're blessed if you have a good one and if you don't, well, one has to make up the loss of having a good mother by being a good mother to one's children.

    This has touched me very much so because I know what it feels like to miss a good mother, even when you lack such a figure in ur life. 5/5. Peace, W.

  • 14 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    Yes...just one more day to touch & feel the
    world's most precious love of all..a mother's
    love..a touching write..take care.

  • 14 years ago

    by Katie Makena

    Wow, this is simply amazing. My mum actually just past away exactly a month ago today. And by reading this has made feel indescribable. (:

  • 14 years ago

    by Lady Nik

    I really enjoyed your poem :) That's all I can really say. Beautiful words and I love the ending. Nik

  • 14 years ago

    by Rachel RTVW

    Such a sad pice. I don't know what I would do without my mom. It is hard when someone you love so much passes away and there are things left unsaid. A very emotional and thought provoking piece!