Don't leave me!

by XxBabii GirlxX   Aug 31, 2009


He's leaving me now, and I don't know why.
I Just want to cry
I wish it was a lie.
He's leaving me now.
I want to know why.
He's making me cry.
I hope it's a lie
He makes me want to die
He left me now I don't know why,
He made me cry,
It wasn't a lie,
why did he have to leave, all I ask is - WHY?
So i guess it's Good- Bye

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  • 14 years ago

    by Em

    Love it, 5/5. Em x

  • 14 years ago

    by Barbara Jean

    5-good ryme. i thought it was good!

  • 14 years ago

    by Love Panda

    Nicly structured and wording was good.
    i would of liked to have seen more stanzas, as i was a little dissapointed that your poem was so short.

    nicly done.

    IBE
    x

  • 14 years ago

    by silvertung69

    I love the way you wrote this, the way you used the same words and gave them different meanings was grate! nice job!

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