This is probably one of the best tribute poems i have every read. So very well worded and put a visual scene in my mind as i read it.

Great job!!!!

A nice tribute to your mother. I am sure she would have been so proud of you. Good job.

Wow, i realy loved this poem, alot! so much emotion. the structure and flow were good and the wording was awsome. well done on an excellent job.

ibe
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Olwin
what a beautiful tribute to your mom. This brought tears to my eyes. a mothers love stays with us forever.
Good Job!
Love Cindy

My first reaction after reading this masterpiece was to smile and thank God for letting me have my mother with me.
I also regretted realizing the fact that i dont hv any vote left for this week and i really want to nominate this one.

Awesome write, loved it all the way.

all the best and take care

Olly,

Your mother would be so proud. You don't ponder quick-witted steps, though It appears to be the lingering ones. Which seems to prevail upon me.. practically the same, of my mother of course. So..

Being alone Is something you shouldn't worry about, because I am here with you whether you like It or not. Just telling you the truth lol~

5/5

I love this poem you made for your mother its beautiful and one of the best poems i read all week

5/5

Mothers are the greatest gift to us..this is a
touching tribute to your mother which keeps
her memory alive...take care.

Great poem! Loved it! 5/5

This brought tears to my eyes because your mum sounds as wonderful as mine. 5/5, Em

Found it, Olwin!

I am pleased I did, too. What a lovely tribute that I'm sure has been received with pride.

"I no longer have your hand in mine,
But you're in my heart for all of time"

^^^^^

Exactly. Loved ones leave us, it's true. But what never, ever leaves is the affect they had upon us while they were here and the memories that are always ours. Those can never be taken away.
A wonderful write and your love for your mother shines bright throughout.

Take care, Olwin and all the best,
Ben