A powerful piece that spoke clearly of your intentions. The wording was brilliant and struck me with description and real feeling to get me more into this piece. Well-written, keep it up.

5/5 from me, thank you for the comment on my poem, I greatly appreciate it.

God bless you!

~MaryAnne

Brilliant write, really loved this piece. The sentences work together to build the general concept. Greatly penned.

Quite an intense write...deep emotions and bits of anger could be felt ... wonderfully expressed...