Comments : Scream!

  • 14 years ago

    by TJ Arizona Eagle

    The frustration in your words are dynamic. Not to mention rage . Very very emotional and intense write though short you got the message across 100% at what you were trying to say.
    Intense write

  • 14 years ago

    by Ingrid

    It's just a poem..mmhh, well I think it has much power and it drew me in right from the title on.
    So many people are left behind and suffer dearly because of it, I think you gave them a voice really well with you poem:)

    Well done Silvia:)


    5/5 Ingrid

  • 14 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    This was really good, powerful and full of emotion, especially frustration. A sad write but well done!

  • 14 years ago

    by Cindy

    Great job on the poem. It's almost like a reoccuring nightmare. I agree with the release of so many emotions that have been bottled up for to long finally being released.
    Love Cindy

  • 14 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    There is a lot of frustration in this write that
    screams with pain as well as anger...and it
    gave such a clear image for the mind too.
    Take care

  • 14 years ago

    by groovydude

    Nice, its a wonderful inspiration to those who need to walk through fear