The frustration in your words are dynamic. Not to mention rage . Very very emotional and intense write though short you got the message across 100% at what you were trying to say.
Intense write

It's just a poem..mmhh, well I think it has much power and it drew me in right from the title on.
So many people are left behind and suffer dearly because of it, I think you gave them a voice really well with you poem:)

Well done Silvia:)

*hugs*

5/5 Ingrid

This was really good, powerful and full of emotion, especially frustration. A sad write but well done!

Sylvia
Great job on the poem. It's almost like a reoccuring nightmare. I agree with Melody...like the release of so many emotions that have been bottled up for to long finally being released.
Love Cindy

There is a lot of frustration in this write that
screams with pain as well as anger...and it
gave such a clear image for the mind too.
Take care

Nice, its a wonderful inspiration to those who need to walk through fear