It's just a poem..mmhh, well I think it has much power and it drew me in right from the title on.
So many people are left behind and suffer dearly because of it, I think you gave them a voice really well with you poem:)
Great job on the poem. It's almost like a reoccuring nightmare. I agree with Melody...like the release of so many emotions that have been bottled up for to long finally being released.