Comments : You (Parallelogram de Crystalline)

  • 14 years ago

    by TJ Arizona Eagle

    You did a great job on this form. It's not as easy as people might think. But absolutely beautiful mixing nature and love.

    Very tender and emotional. This should be a weekly winner. Awesome
    Jimmy

  • 14 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    Truly a beautiful write that incorporates a bit of nature when describing love. The two mix well together.. short but very sweet and full of love. Great work.

  • 14 years ago

    by Ingrid

    Karan truly invented a beautiful format and you did it justice with these words you used. Very beautiful and tender wording, Silvia:)

    *hugs*

    5/5 Ingrid

  • 14 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    Each verse is beautifully crafted with a
    mixture of love and nature. I liked it from
    start to finish..good job!

  • 14 years ago

    by Cindy

    Sylvia
    This is just so beautiful :)

    Gentleness,
    touches of pure softness,
    because of you roses bloom, birds sing.

    It is such a wonderful feeling when you get these feelings inside from the love of another . Just thoughts of that person make everything seem so much more alive and vibrant.

    Resplendent,
    shining so brilliantly,
    sun, moon, stars pale in comparison.

    I have felt this kind of love before. Nothing can compare to the light a love like this brings to our lives.
    Excellent job!
    Love Cindy