Comments : You Will Never Know Who I Am (Quatern)

  • 14 years ago

    by Sylvia

    I think that we may have all felt this way about someone in our lives. I know I have. Good job with the form.

  • 14 years ago

    by Nee

    I believe no one should completely understand the other one, even if they claim they do..they do not.
    Good poem Rach, though I could see you write better than this.
    Your rhyme went a bit cliche on the second stanza.

    "You judge a book by it's cover"
    ^
    Should be "its" not "it's".

    Well done :)

  • 14 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    Some people think they knows us very well
    but are wrong. I like the way you have
    expressed your feelings here; I also liked the
    form..good write. Thank you also for the
    comment :)

  • 14 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    WOW! This poem held a very strong message that spoke the truth. We truly do not know who someone else is; although we like to think we do. We make up assumptions about one another and judge people right and left. I think we are all guilty of doing this... but we need to stop and realize we don't know the truth about that person and we shouldnt judge them. Loved how you threw the very famous line about not judging a book by its cover, that line tied in with your poem excellently. Wonderful write from you, it spoke of a voice that wanted to be heard, loud and clear. This was brilliant. [:

  • 14 years ago

    by Cindy

    Rachel
    I love the form you used for this piece. What a deep write....with intense emotion. I have a hard time hiding my thoughts. I guess I'm to sesitive. I'm like an open book.
    Good job!
    Love you
    Aunt Cindy