Universal Hues (Haiku)

by Rachel RTVW   Sep 7, 2009


Solar wind rushes
Brushing the constellations
Coloring the sky

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  • 14 years ago

    by Daisy if you do

    Rachel,
    You always have a way of making the most beautiful nature poems, no matter the form you choose. Very nicely done. 5/5

    Take Care,
    Kay

  • 14 years ago

    by Christopher Wry

    Weel done. Wording could have been a liitle better I think.

  • 14 years ago

    by Lonely Rider

    You do love writing on cosmos :)
    very unique topic you have chosen... well penned :) I wish I could see the solar winds coloring the sky :)

  • 14 years ago

    by Cindy

    Rachel
    beautifuly done Haiku. Images are great.
    Love you
    Aunt Cindy

  • 14 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    This was truly a beautiful piece, although it was a haiku it held that beauty of nature all Haikus should have. (: I can see the most beautiful dark sky with different colored stars. What a gorgeous image that would be. I love your imagination here...thanks for sharing!

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