Nitin
This is so sad. Yet your words ring so true.

There are dreams we all travel
Some bring smiles and some fear
Been walking on a long road
With thoughts that are never clear

How many places life takes us that we never dream we will go. One never knows what tomorrow will bring our way.

Drowning in my own eyes
Laughing on my own cries
Seeking truth in my own lies
Rising when my soul dies

Great imagery within this stanza. I feel the daily struggles in your mind. How hard it is to hold up to the pressures of life.

There are dreams we all travel
Some make us rise and some fall
Been riding this tide alone
Struggling while life takes its toll

It is hard when we feel like we have to walk through life alone without anyone understanding what we really feel inside.

Left alone within my mind
Searching for serenity
If only I could see the truth
What really lives inside me

I think if you look hard enough you will see what I see a man full of kindness and compassion.
Excellent job yaar!
Love you
Cindy

Oh my I dont know what to say. This almost made me cry, the emotion was just overflowing and everything was so very sad. I think Cindy pinpointed all that needed to be said. You did an excellent job making the reader feel the writer's feelings. Definatly a poem that is full of a lot of truth. You did a great job.

An awesome poem.... with a depth of feeling that can be felt. Loved it. Very well put together... Brilliant job!

I absolutely loved the imagery in this poem. Loved the format and the way it was written. 5/5

There are dreams we all travel
Some bring smiles and some fear
Been walking on a long road
With thoughts that are never clear

Ahh yes, we all walk that path without been
able to get a clear idea.

There are dreams we all travel
Some make us rise and some fall
Been riding this tide alone
Struggling while life takes its toll

I can feel the frustration within this verse & I
guess all share this same feeling.

Left alone within my mind
Searching for serenity
If only I could see the truth
What really lives inside me

They say peace comes from within. When
there is hope with it comes serenity. Truth is
there but at times we do not want to see it...

A touching write which brings back memories
for me...take care.

Great one... loved it, and loved the feeling I got while reading it. I see that you're still going strong... keep it up.

An emotionally charged piece that brings a tear to the eyes.The depth and sadness behind the meaning in this piece tugs at the heartstrings my friend.
An enjoyable read.
Paul...