Comments : Carefree (Swap Quatrain)

  • 14 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    Those carefree days..forget all & be free. I
    like the topic you chose & very well done
    with the form!

  • 14 years ago

    by TJ Arizona Eagle

    Princess Fiona? Isn't she green and kinda hmm ugly at night ? Sorry got off the subject

    Awesome poem very uplifting and puts a smile on the readers face. You are a treasure and a joy. We love your poems

  • 14 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    This was such an amazing and beautiful piece. I love the optimism and happiness that glowed through your words. Absolutely well done and gorgeous ;)

  • 14 years ago

    by groovydude

    Such a happy feeling I had after reading this, thank you

  • 14 years ago

    by anand singh

    Beautiful and well penned.If only life can be this way.
    You've done a good job with this form Sylvia, but then again, only good things come from a great mind.You are very inspiring and tallented and i've always enjoyed your wonderful works.Keep up the great work.
    Paul...