Comments : The Colors of Summer

  • 14 years ago

    by Sylvia

    Summer is my favorite season and you have painted a wonderful image with your words. I am sorry to see it go. Well done.

  • 14 years ago

    by Lonely Rider

    Tall cypress and oak, my company here
    As white, puffy clouds go tumbling by
    The view from these bluffs so endless and clear
    As I look beyond the deep azure sky.

    ^^lovely lovely imagery... so serene and soothing... beautifully penned...

    For nature displays her carpet of green
    And heaven above's an ocean of blue
    The colors of Summer, so soft and serene
    In this sunny portrait I'm painting for you.

    ^^ loved the colors of summer that you have painted... gives more life to summer itself... vibrant and beautiful...

    well penned :)
    keep writing :)

  • 10 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    I love the flow, rhymes and the picture you have
    painted of summer! It left me smiling towards the
    end...lovely!