Comments : Broken Away.

  • 14 years ago

    by Saving Grace

    Wow. This is deep. Very powerful. Youve done a great job. This poem is excellent. Youve expressed yourself well in this poem. Nice work. 5/5

  • 14 years ago

    by Still Slightly Broken

    Great work yet again.

    Tears rush over
    The curves of your eyes,
    People say things
    But whisper your replies.

    The imagery with this stanza was so powerful and clear.
    Keep it up xo

  • 14 years ago

    by FindingHarmonyInYurCries

    Agreed;
    Time n time again.

    :)
    You'll heal hun,
    You're too strong now not to.

  • 14 years ago

    by Em

    This is very good. The words used are very powerful and interesting, well written. 5/5, Em