Save me dedicated to jason

by miracle   Sep 19, 2009


Save me, take me out of this place,
your the only one that makes my heart race.

these four walls portrays as a home cages me,
i need you to set me free.

wake me from this nightmare,
run your fingers through my hair.

tell me it was all a dream.
this reality of waking with out you
is making me scream.

your eyes look down apon me
the for knowing stars of night.

your our my dark knight
to complete my soul,
as we collide our love ignite.

our memory fallows me like a shadow.
Your scent is embedded into my pillow.

Leave me here and i will fall apart.
I always said you had my heart.

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  • 14 years ago

    by Jay Perry Jr

    Good rhyming good poem i like it 5/5

  • 14 years ago

    by Jennifer RIP Lesthat Hayden

    I think you should work more on structure. The flow was a bit choppy. You had the rhyming down okay, I really liked how you rhymed nightmare with hair, that was a sweet sort of line. It just needs to have a little more structure to make it more enjoyable to read.

  • 14 years ago

    by lovemehateme

    Very well written. Tha rhyme of tha poem flowed rely well. 5/5

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