Love is only as strong.

by nmdoza   Sep 19, 2009


Love is only as strong,
As the one who cares less, and loves less.
And whomever loves less,
They have the greater power to end it all,
To destroy all hopes, all dreams,
And the eternal love within your heart.
No matter how dominant your love may be towards another,
It can all be ruined into tiny shards,
Regardless the amount of time sand has been pouring into the other side of the hourglass.
If there is one that loves less, cares less,
They will be less dedicated, less honest, less loyal.
And no longer will love be dominant, but doubt will.
For doubt is truly dominant.
Doubt will lead you into the greatest suspicions.
And suspicions will gain your trust,
While you lose trust in the undying love you thought you've found.
Which ends it all, for good, eternally, undeservingly.
Your love may be strong for this one individual.
It may be the strongest feeling of love anyone could experience towards another,
But it will never be strong enough to surpass each barrier that goes by,
If there is one who loves less, cares less.
For they will be less dedicated, less honest, less loyal.
Because love is only as strong as the one who cares less, and loves less.
Causing all hopes, all dreams,
And the eternal love within your heart to be broken.
Regardless of the time that has passed by,
No sunshine will shine here,
If the doubt is truly dominant.
Since love is only as strong.

- nmdoza.

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  • 14 years ago

    by nmdoza

    Okay thanks. I'll try to edit that as soon as I can :)

  • 14 years ago

    by xLeftxBehindx

    Wow! Very well done! There is really no other words that can describe the emotion in that poem.

    The only thing that I would change is you might want to break the poem up in to stanzas of 4-6 lines each. It would make it flow a little better.

    Again amzaing job on all poems!