" I can't explain the reason why
When you're away I want to cry
To you perhaps this means nothing
But for me its everything "

This stanza is my favourite! Its wow! Sometimes its very true that its so hard to tell others how exactly you feel! And this stanza really relate to my life for now! When I read this stanza it just made my heart so itchy!! Very nice poem! 5/5

Aww this was cute. I don't read many love poems but I liked this one. It has a sweet tone to it and it's easy to relate to. A lovely poem dear. :) Nik

Such a sweet poem with alot of meaning behind it. It's hard to live with a crush that's unreturned. Well written, 5/5. Em

Great poem, everyone can relate to it! 5/5

Nice poem.. Always express your true feeling.. Keep it up.

Bravo

Very nice! I liked it! you know, I kinda dedicate that to someone I know... :D but your work was done good! keep it up!

A very heartwarming piece, written in a very sweet way...keep writing..:-)

I love your poem! Great!

Great 5/5
My fave part was:

can't explain the reason why
When you're away I want to cry
To you perhaps this means nothing
But for me its everything

When you're coming
i'm always blushing
when you're smiling
my heart begin so irritating

Such an awsum write!