I love it.
i like the way u wrote it and the feelings in this peom are amazing
keep up the good work

Wow.
Very good.
Keep it up 5/5

Wonderfull written, I love your work. It's so meaningful :) 5/5, Em

I love it n i like how u ended it with not with a boy but a girl great poem5/5

5/5

Your poem is great
I love the expression I got from it