One of my favorites for shure. It was incredible, i can relate to it completely. You are going on my favorite authors list. keep up the good work!

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emily

Wow.
wow.
wow.
that was incredible
the day that i get to this level ill be in college if that
your younger than me and so much better
feel proud for what you can create and describe.

Most of us can relates to a poem like this. I like the message it convey, well done, kel.

Very well done.
My favorite part was:

"Apparently explaining was not enough.
So I showed you where i place every single cut"

just be careful of the words you rhyme they are just a little off but other than that, amazing poem!

keep it up!

This piece had profound expressed emotion. It was raw and straight to the point. Loved it.

I dont knw why but i love this line...
"Because of you my heart beats off time"
i enjoyed this poem. greta job,

victoria