Such a sweet, emotional poem. Good job and well written, 5/5. Em x

I dig it but next time try to give a poetic format i feel like I'm reading a letter but still good poem 5/5

I think you have a lot of talent.
You should write more and a poetic format will help a lot.
Keep writing

You've got tallent, but also plenty of room to grow.
the poem itself was lovely, a bit short but that's not realy important now is it. One thing I would advice you to do though, is change the way it looks. use more blank spaces and it will look a lot more enticing to potential readers.

all in all, a great effort and a decent poem. keep writing and never let anyone tell you that you're not tallented.

greets max

So nice poem , i really like it alot
keep it up :)

I loved your poem! :) Good Work!!

NICE!...Short but u got the point out. :)

This is a very sweet poem:]
i rlly liked it but i would have loved for it to b a little bit longer
i enjoyed reading it:)
very well written:)
5/5

This is a very sweet poem:]
i rlly liked it but i would have loved for it to b a little bit longer
i enjoyed reading it:)
very well written:)
5/5

This is a very sweet poem:]
i rlly liked it but i would have loved for it to b a little bit longer
i enjoyed reading it:)
very well written:)
5/5

Thanks lol